شن رايكم في هادي....لااهو اني جديد على الســـراكة

[center] if you just feel what i feel you'll understand why i tear , if you can see what i'v seen you'll wonder why i'm still in here , if you fear what i fear you'll be close toi me and near , helpless dreams weeps in my deep sleep , endless pain abuse my soul with no mercy or shame , sadness eyes turns into an endless madness , thoughts of rage tryin" to escape out of my darkness cage , lonley's my soul like an unholy volcano's hole , and my heart beat's no more , all i can hear's wicked screams in my twisted skull...im the only one that suffer and torn , i'm the one who hold alot of lorn , what i'v done to deserve all this heavnley damnation , what i'v done to live without a goal or destination , all i want's take all this madness away so i can forgive myself and start a new day , i cant feel my soul anymore , the situation getting worse more and more , i'm dying inside , holding back the tears i never cry , and what i see's me faded away mind and soul and body day by day....let me tell about what i fear , its all about living and dying in here , now i'm holdin my breath , ignoreing my birth , counting my scars like an criminal behind an unhloy golden bars of the stars , i was doom by this fear of the unknown , fears from tomorrow , fear from the unborn , now i'm down on my knees , dazing on my bloody tears , why i had to be born , to feel my soul burn , to live through this endless lorn , now my tears flow just for vain , every season with no reason[i]

الصراكة اهيا باهية راه يا عمو
مزيد من التقدم
الراب يبي الرخية انت ارخي تو هو يرخي امعاك

keep going bro
nice stuff

okay but this ain't about rhymes so if some rhymes didn't fit

change it man so it can make more sense

WhatEver u say Man , u Got ur Style , i'v Got Mine , So Dont Be Mean About It..

اقوا خوتى

Mnawer Ya SnoOoOoOoP , Miss Ya Man

Shadow_Mezran كتب:

WhatEver u say Man , u Got ur Style , i'v Got Mine , So Dont Be Mean About It..

i wasn't mean but tha truth is even myself i dont make sense sometimes

يعنى ما فيش عيب فى النصائح وانا عادىنأخد نصائح حتى من اللى اصغر منى

ههههههه
شكلك طيب يامعاد...
تي فوت الزب.. قاعد يفشك وطاقته