As the night goes by freestyle

as the night goes, ma rhymatic sence start and flows, ma thoughts_ ...start mixin up like im ill, ma brain wont stop or still, am I live or dat is death starin at me with both eyes, boom click clack, the sound of gun triger facing ma head, damn it the shot was blank, am I picturing stuff or ma mentality has a lack, I see everything black, tho ma eyes r wide open, is that cause we r livin in da dark??...ppl waistin their souls..livin with there cheasts empty no hearts just a hole, I started askin ma self..damn it lil then wut is ur role, am I supposed to change something or ma excistance has no goal, this qestion is unstoppably crossin ma mind, would the world change if I died...probably not....the only qestion I got answer to..is yes ma verses r hot..can't denie or say NOT...anyway..the night just has begun, still gotta millions of Ideas waitting to run, another hour is finished and done, I started hearin voices sayin stop thinkin hun, and Im like is deamons talkin to me to, shit this aint no fun, I think morning aint going to come, Im coverin ma ears. in case ma inner voices try to confinse me cuttin ma wrist usin blades,I think I c some light, is dat finally sun shinin and killin da dark, damn G it just a car is street, tryin to park,...suddenly everytin stopped, wut is gonna happen, I feel a touch on ma shoulder and it kept rubbin, wake up it is mornin. didn't hear ur alarm shoutin and warnin, It wasn't wut it seemed...SHIT the whole nite was a dream, ah wut a shame, ma Imagination should stop being so damn lame

Peace out..Lil shady no doubt

الي يقراه يعطينا كومنت يا شباب.....وعادي الي ما عجباش ايقول

u gt som gd lines ther
bt som if u jst change em round bt it is kwl
keep it up

ok tanx C note.....امقدر رايك وامنورنا

نرجو باقي الشباب

قوية لكن هذينا يسمو فيهن بالفصحة خواطر

صح ولالا ؟ unsure

والله حاجة صح شكرا عالموضوع

bengazi كتب:: قوية لكن هذينا يسمو فيهن بالفصحة خواطر

صح ولالا ؟

اها وبالليبي فريستايل شكرا عل المرور

Metal head girl كتب:: والله حاجة صح شكرا عالموضوع

وشكرا لكي انتي عل الرد نورتينا بمرورك

Metal head girl كتب:: والله حاجة صح شكرا عالموضوع

وين ياااااااا اناshpeer fara7

باه مافيش حد تاني يبي يقراه وايديرنا تعليق عل البوست.........ولا ما عجبكمش

مية مية يا برووو

كيب جوينج

Mr.Taylor كتب:: مية مية يا برووو

كيب جوينج

امنور يا طير تسلم اهم حاجة عجبك الفيرس

دامي

كييب قوينق

تجمولنا ولا ننزلولنا حاجة فى العربى

ddangor كتب:: تجمولنا ولا ننزلولنا حاجة فى العربى

باه

ههههههههههههههه
مش تمام ياكنافه

AG كتب:: ههههههههههههههه
مش تمام ياكنافه

ماما ادور فيك يا بيبي توا انقوللها لقيته يسنكح في المنتدي تفرح

nice one brother keep it up

DJ-S3lini كتب:: nice one brother keep it up

امنور يا سليني يا طيري......باهي في حد عجبه سطر معين ولا حاجة ولا تطلعو قريتو اول سطر وتجبرو بخاطري ههههههه

keep it up
and here's my addition

Darlin' come under cover
Another night to discover
Let's slip where senses gather
Let's drift between the sea and sky
As the night goes by

Sands shift
Orchids so strange
In the moonlight
Brushing our faces
Places where love blooms
And dies
While the night goes by
Oh, and the spirits call
Sun upon your shadows fall
Tracing every breath we draw

Come into my dreams
Come into my dreams
Darlin' let's go where the night goes
Let's drift where senses gather
Let's make this night last forever
Into my dreams
Into my dreams

Darlin' let's go
Where the night goes
Time slips
Oh darlin' how it flies
When the night goes by

All through the night
Sirens call
Come to me
I'll come to you
As the night softly
goes by bye

Midnight
Moon on our shoulder
Daybreak
Another one older
Darlin' heavenly blue
Glories fade into view

Let's go
Under the stars
That are beating
Under the moonlight
Stars shoot
Dusk just a whisper
Make this night
Last forever
Oh how I wonder
Where the night goes
Oh Let's wonder
Where the night goes
As the night goes
By bye
By Bye

Lil bee.....قلبتها ليا رومانسية انت وفيلم لن اعيش في جلباب ابي.....موضوع هكي نبو تعليق نحنا بس....عموم مشكور عل المرور والتكسيدة

kk
my comments

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ma brain wont stop or still
** what do you mean with this **

, am I live or dat is death starin at me with both eyes
** dis line is not makin' a sense to me **

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take care .. and keep up your good work

lil beee كتب:: kk
my comments

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ma brain wont stop or still
** what do you mean with this **

, am I live or dat is death starin at me with both eyes
** dis line is not makin' a sense to me **

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take care .. and keep up your good work

اول واحد معناها دماغي مايبيش ايبطل تفكير ولا يهدي

تاني واحد معناها انا مازلت حي ولا الموت قاعد ايبحت فيا وبياخدني

كان ما فهمتش هضينا تبقي غبي وخلاص...

بيس

thank you for your polite respond
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and fo shalla ur just anada stupid as fuck